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  • The signing (plz help ) beginning give me some good ideas, for a way to train.

    Primary Genre: Science fiction Word Count: 17,561 Beta Readers: 2

    Hi, I'm trying to write a dystopian kind of novel. I'm currently feeling jumbled and unsure. I really like how the book is in the end but I've been struggling with writing the start, I only have a few chapters in right now and just wanted to throw it out...

    Hi, I'm trying to write a dystopian kind of novel. I'm currently feeling jumbled and unsure. I really like how the book is in the end but I've been struggling with writing the start, I only have a few chapters in right now and just wanted to throw it out there for anyone to read. Please give me some amazing suggestions and routes. I really am struggling with getting this in the same tone as the beginning chapters (1.2) and making it grow. Also I know my grammar is bad, just in the very beginning stages.
    Im having issues with maybe introducing characters, and also feel its to short. I have planned out the middle to end and like the direction but will keep it updated as i go.

  • Everything is Red in Space

    Primary Genre: Science fiction Word Count: 18,600 Beta Readers: 0

    Murphy is an astronaut who spent billions of years in isolation after all people on Earth died to a plague. They recollect their identity by retelling their stories with Hal and with the people they loved.

  • Prologue- 1000 nights to freedom

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 2,000 Beta Readers: 1

    introduction to two of the secondary characters of the book. Levi and Rafiwa in a train accident that turn out to be a twist in fate.

  • 1000 nights to freedom

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 16,000 Beta Readers: 2

    The first eight chapter of the book.
    It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects...

    The first eight chapter of the book.
    It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects that the main five characters have personally suffered from and want to escape thus attaining freedom.

  • The hunt

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 72,000 Beta Readers: 2

    I want a quick review of whether the story is compelling to readers and will make for an interesting read.

  • A Secret Mermaid - Daughter of the Gods

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 37,214 Beta Readers: 1

    I would love any type of criticism, praise, notes, critiques, etc. I would love to know which characters you like, which lines you like, and which you don't, and which your not sure of. Tell me if you think I should cut a part out, etc.

  • Sairon: The Fake DNA's Loving Soul

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 75,000 Beta Readers: 1

    Chained by History and DNA

    In a sci-fi fantasy planet called Ns, the Myloseans, the ruling race, subjugate the slave class, the Adhirans. A princess, named Nadine, wishes to be queen because she believes that is what she is destined to do as part of her family, the Cyrils. However;...

    Chained by History and DNA

    In a sci-fi fantasy planet called Ns, the Myloseans, the ruling race, subjugate the slave class, the Adhirans. A princess, named Nadine, wishes to be queen because she believes that is what she is destined to do as part of her family, the Cyrils. However; she is not that bright and hasn't unlocked her powers yet, which most people would have unlocked by her age. Shunned by her family, she wishes to join the military to unlock her powers.

    Meanwhile an organization called to Elakiar hopes to exterminate the Myloseans in order for the Adhirans to be free. And other characters with hidden motives stand in her way. Will the chains tighten around Nadine? Will she break free? Or maybe something else entirely?

    Contains:
    Violence
    Gore
    Rape
    Sexual Assault
    Implied Sex

  • SBD 1

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 25,400 Beta Readers: 0

    While being pursued by a group of vigilantes, Ikai runs into a shimmering light that takes him 300 years into the past. As he navigates the fantastic, ancient world of history that he only ever read about in books, Ikai discovers things about himself that he didn't know was possible....

    While being pursued by a group of vigilantes, Ikai runs into a shimmering light that takes him 300 years into the past. As he navigates the fantastic, ancient world of history that he only ever read about in books, Ikai discovers things about himself that he didn't know was possible.

    Usehjiki of the past and Usehjiki of the future have their lines crossed, with Ikai at the intersection. With the help of new, found allies, Ikai will race against prophecies to untangle the mysteries of Usehjiki and reveal the bits of its history that have been lost to the hands of time.

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    I won't mind any type of comments that you can offer about plot, characterization and world-building.

  • Fighting The Undead

    Primary Genre: Realistic fiction Word Count: 38,338 Beta Readers: 0

    When 16 year old, James Andrews, wakes up alone and in a zombie apocalypse, he is kidnapped and reunited with his family. Only problem? They were being held captive by an evil gang. They end up running into more dangers as the book developes.

  • We Were Born of Spellfire

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 90,000 Beta Readers: 5

    Two sisters have hidden in a northern Norwegian birch forest, far away from witch hunters, until they became women. Now that their grandmother is gone, one sister puts a curse on the village that burned her mother and forced them to run while the other sister leaves to start a...

    Two sisters have hidden in a northern Norwegian birch forest, far away from witch hunters, until they became women. Now that their grandmother is gone, one sister puts a curse on the village that burned her mother and forced them to run while the other sister leaves to start a new life without magic. But they both must find a way to survive or else face a destiny that always seems to find witches, wicked or not.

    I'm looking for feedback on:
    1. the overall story - do you want to keep reading? is there anything that's boring or confusing or doesn't work plot-wise?
    2. the characters - do you connect with them, like them, hate them, feel enough either way about them?
    3. the language - how do you like the style? does it draw you in, make you cringe? are there moments that you think there should be more action and less reflection or more reflection and less action?

    But also, whatever (constructive) feedback you want to give is much appreciated!

    Thanks! :)