Rising Light/Dying Night

Primary Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 95,631

Description and Details:

Two twin boys seeking freedom from their past, struggle to outrun the darkness of their mysterious origins. Can they overcome the darkness in this coming of age journey?
***Hello! I am open to any form of feedback. I would describe my book as a dark fantasy with heavy elements of science fiction. I am a newer writer and am open to guidance and constructive criticism. Primarily, I am looking to know if my story flows well and makes sense. If my characters are easy to connect with. I have concerns about my ending as about my over all prose. I am not too concerned with grammar at this time. Thank for your time.

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