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  • Verder dan ooit - Proofcopy

    Primary Genre: Travel Word Count: 76,000 Beta Readers: 0

    --- DUTCH BOOK ---
    YA avontuur

    Als je niet naar huis kunt, waar ga je dan heen?

    Wanneer de zelfstandige Lisa van Leeuwen na de zoveelste aanvaring met haar moeder uit huis wordt geplaatst, raakt ze steeds verder weg van de wereld die ze kent. In een opwelling ontvlucht ze...

    --- DUTCH BOOK ---
    YA avontuur

    Als je niet naar huis kunt, waar ga je dan heen?

    Wanneer de zelfstandige Lisa van Leeuwen na de zoveelste aanvaring met haar moeder uit huis wordt geplaatst, raakt ze steeds verder weg van de wereld die ze kent. In een opwelling ontvlucht ze haar oude leven, maar zonder het te weten, laat ze een spoor van vernieling achter.
    De vriendelijke Cédric besluit zijn perfect ogende leven achter te laten en met haar mee op pad te gaan. Ze kennen elkaar niet en onder welke andere omstandigheden dan ook hadden ze elkaar nooit leren kennen. Toch zijn ze voor hun toekomst nu afhankelijk van elkaar. Krijgen ze wat ze zoeken, of helpen ze elkaar alleen maar verder in de problemen?

    Een verhaal over strijd, pijn en vriendschap, voor iedereen die op zoek is naar zijn eigen identiteit en niet vies is van een beetje avontuur op de weg er naar toe.

  • A Prelude to a Rapunzel Tale

    Primary Genre: Fairy tale Word Count: 20,741 Beta Readers: 0

    Before there was Rapunzel, there was the witch of the tower.
    Saffron is one of the youngest daughters of a high-ranking family and is expected to catch the eye of a God. Luckily for her, she does, setting up her family for life. During a celebration she is throwing with...

    Before there was Rapunzel, there was the witch of the tower.
    Saffron is one of the youngest daughters of a high-ranking family and is expected to catch the eye of a God. Luckily for her, she does, setting up her family for life. During a celebration she is throwing with him, she crosses paths with the couple that will provide her and her beloved God with the long-awaited child.

    New Adult

  • Single Sal

    Primary Genre: Romance Word Count: 57,000 Beta Readers: 0

    A struggling vegetarian actress about to turn thirty makes a deal with an influential meat mogal she can't refuse.

    A sweet with heat fake fiance romantic comedy.

  • Cost of Closure-Manuscript

    Primary Genre: Crime/detective Word Count: 87,555 Beta Readers: 0

    A gripping crime fiction, which follows Detective Raymond Townes’ final attempt to return to duty, restore his tumultuous career and retire with dignity. Battling his addictions, impulsive nature, and trying to silence his inner cynic, Townes discovers an active serial rapist in their Louisiana parish. He works to find balance...

    A gripping crime fiction, which follows Detective Raymond Townes’ final attempt to return to duty, restore his tumultuous career and retire with dignity. Battling his addictions, impulsive nature, and trying to silence his inner cynic, Townes discovers an active serial rapist in their Louisiana parish. He works to find balance as the consequences of years of bad decisions inevitably find him. Can he control himself long enough to solve this case and stop this sadistic monster before another woman gets hurt?

  • Believe Me, I’m Lying

    Primary Genre: Mystery Word Count: 16,577 Beta Readers: 1

    I am mainly looking for flow of the story, pacing, distinctions in characters and how they appear to you, and if the transitions between scenes feel appropriate.

    Any feedback is welcome. :)

    As a caution: This story entails discussion sexual assault and has some violence or vulgar language.

    This story...

    I am mainly looking for flow of the story, pacing, distinctions in characters and how they appear to you, and if the transitions between scenes feel appropriate.

    Any feedback is welcome. :)

    As a caution: This story entails discussion sexual assault and has some violence or vulgar language.

    This story is told by three protagonists: Michelle, Baila, and Connor.

    Tentative synopsis: Following a party, Connor was convicted for DUI and spent the summer on informal probation. [This is to justify that he can work with people as long as he follows probation rules, avoids contact with people involved in the accident, meets curfew, and doesn’t leave the suburb (if you’re curious, it’s based in the east coast of U. S.)]

    For as long as he can remember, Xavier has been competitive and wanted to see him fail. The problem is: why does he have such a long-standing grudge to the point he fabricates a faslse accusation, and for sexual assault?

    Baila thinks Connor broke up with her because she’s too secretive, but if he or her friends knew everything (all at once, at least), the familiarity world would crack open. When the memory of something comes back to the surface and a familiar face scares her in dreams, that’s what happens.

    Michelle is connected to them both, but she’s the “quiet atheist” to her friends who catches a spy and brings it to the attention of Connor’s attourney.

  • Self Node Notes

    Primary Genre: Self improvement (Non-fiction) Word Count: 26,000 Beta Readers: 0

    I am looking for honest feedback on how understandable and helpful is this journal.

  • (Action-Fiction) Nevada Lowball

    Primary Genre: Suspense/thriller Word Count: 1,345 Beta Readers: 0

    Drugs, money, prostitutes and a heist gone wrong has Army Vet Wesly Lyons running to protect his wife Maggie from an out of town, husband and wife hitman team.

  • Crow

    Primary Genre: Science fiction Word Count: 50,000 Beta Readers: 0

    Simply put, Crow is the villain's story. when I set out writing this, about four years ago. I hardly imagined how quickly and deeply I fell in love with this novel. This is why in part, that I knew it would be good to get another set of eyes on...

    Simply put, Crow is the villain's story. when I set out writing this, about four years ago. I hardly imagined how quickly and deeply I fell in love with this novel. This is why in part, that I knew it would be good to get another set of eyes on this, besides my own. Crow is a science fiction with a dash of fantasy. it takes place on the world of Crowdidia- a planet that holds two different races - the Crowdidyians and the Dragtonians. who are at odds with each other. The novel centers around Jocren, who is a half-Dragtonian and half Crowdidyian male, who was sent on a mission by Dr.Rotter to free Crow. Jocren reluctantly complies, knowing that if he wants to see his sister alive again, he will do as Dr. Rotter demands. Jocren is joined by six others(not counting the scientists), whose sole job is to ensure that Jocren completes his task of freeing Crow.

    Crow is the first of two novels. it has been edited numerous times and I'm looking for a fresh pair of eyes to look over it, before I begin the process of getting it published.
    Sincerly,
    Richard M Polk

  • An American Hero

    Primary Genre: Historical fiction Word Count: 97,400 Beta Readers: 10

    I need to know if you liked the story and did I tell it in a way that kept you turning the pages.

  • The King's Summit

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 73,858 Beta Readers: 0

    The annual kingdom summit is cursed. For the past thirteen years, the people of Dewar have breathed easy, knowing that the gathering that took the lives of their beloved king and queen and led to the deaths of thousands of civilians would never happen again. The disappearance of a local...

    The annual kingdom summit is cursed. For the past thirteen years, the people of Dewar have breathed easy, knowing that the gathering that took the lives of their beloved king and queen and led to the deaths of thousands of civilians would never happen again. The disappearance of a local woman, however, sparks a chain of events, leading the reclusive king Aquillo to announce the revival of the summit. And this time, it will be open to the kingdoms of the surrounding planets.

    Jaya Nideha has spent her entire life behind the stone walls of Inestar, under her grandfather’s thumb, watching life be lived by others and quietly wishing for her turn. She doesn’t complain, because there are others who have it much worse, namely her mother and all the other slaves of Inestar. When her grandfather offers her a deal, her mother’s freedom for Aquillo’s glowing eye, she is conflicted. Assassinating a powerful king on a distant planet with no way home seems like a suicide mission, but this could be her mother’s- and maybe Jaya’s- only chance at a real life.

    Things do not go as planned, and as Jaya finds herself faced with ancient evils and a mysterious foe who everyone is convinced is her partner from Inestar, she must take a chance at trusting Dewar’s prince and renowned traveler, Quielle. Opening herself up to the prince is risky, because he’s not only fighting for her safety but her heart.