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Get Beta Readers for Your WorkIona is a sheltered only daughter of a social-climbing mother who would do everything to advance her rank in their society; a loving father who couldn't control his wife. Her parents hide a dark secret about Iona's nature. They hire a man, Bren, to train Iona's self-control to prepare for...
Iona is a sheltered only daughter of a social-climbing mother who would do everything to advance her rank in their society; a loving father who couldn't control his wife. Her parents hide a dark secret about Iona's nature. They hire a man, Bren, to train Iona's self-control to prepare for her introduction to their society. Unbeknownst to her parents, Bren has a dark agenda of his own and sees Iona as the key to his plan for achieving his goal. He grooms Iona, seduces then isolates her from her family and best friend, and exposes her monstrous side - that of a creature driven to mate and kill. He uses the aftermath of Iona's actions to bend her to his will. Ruled by fear of exposure and prosecution, Iona has to find a way to control her beastly nature and be a worthy wife to Bren and mother to her young daughters. Until she finds out the truth about her nature, the laws of their kind, and Bren's betrayal. And it unleashes the rage that she was afraid she had in her, proving that the blood lust in her veins is far stronger than what she can handle.
TO THE READERS: Please let me know what you think of the story, the characters and the dialogues. Do you think the story is compelling? Did it hold your attention? Do you like the characters? Which one you liked best? Which one you want to read more about? Are the character arc well written? Any suggestions and comments are welcome.
This is the first 30 or so pages from my book The Blood and the Infinite. I am still in rough draft mode but I would love some feedback on pacing, imagery, grammar, and dialog.
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Hey guys! I am looking for all sorts of feedback on how interesting it is, how can I make the story clearer, and grammar, punctuation, and more. Please submit feedback for whatever reason you see fit! When reading, please keep in mind that there is a murder scene in this...
Hey guys! I am looking for all sorts of feedback on how interesting it is, how can I make the story clearer, and grammar, punctuation, and more. Please submit feedback for whatever reason you see fit! When reading, please keep in mind that there is a murder scene in this chapter. Reader's discretion is advised.
With most of the book I would like to know if the characters were well developed and likable. And if there is anything that I could explore further, what parts were boring, and what are the books strengths and weaknesses.
In Chapters 5, 8, and 14, I have a sub...
With most of the book I would like to know if the characters were well developed and likable. And if there is anything that I could explore further, what parts were boring, and what are the books strengths and weaknesses.
In Chapters 5, 8, and 14, I have a sub plot where Henry, Juda, and two knights go out looking for Dawn. I want to know how I could develop them more.
I am open to any other suggestions as well!
They say stories don't die unless everyone forgets; I say some of them run and scrape and bite, never to be forgotten.
I want feedback about the overall feel of the story.
Anything that can help me improve and suggestions please leave them down as well as how to use better vocabulary.
This novel is a light rom-com. I would appreciate any feedback, especially if you notice anything culturally or socially offensive or inauthentic. Thanks, I hope you enjoy it.
This is a harry potter post hogwarts fanfiction
This is a Harry Potter fanfiction