Beta Documents Looking for Readers

• 1000 nights to freedom

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 16,000 Beta Readers: 2

  The first eight chapter of the book.
  It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects...

  The first eight chapter of the book.
  It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects that the main five characters have personally suffered from and want to escape thus attaining freedom.

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• Weathering Echowinds (2 of 3)

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 23,000 Beta Readers: 1

  Second of three parts of Book 2 of The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix Trilogy. Check out the first book (The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix: Legacy) on Amazon, Kobo, BN, etc. if you are interested.

  Book 2 Summary:
  Namesiwa gave everything to ensure the ruins of Avaleur would survive. No. He...

  Second of three parts of Book 2 of The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix Trilogy. Check out the first book (The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix: Legacy) on Amazon, Kobo, BN, etc. if you are interested.

  Book 2 Summary:
  Namesiwa gave everything to ensure the ruins of Avaleur would survive. No. He gave everything to ensure the survival of the Avaleurian people. The legacy he left behind now rests in the hands of a new Sage and those who will stand with her.
  Syen and Roland, Sage and knight, hold first to the hope Namesiwa showed them. But grips can loosen with uncertainty and doubt. Friends have become enemies. Sons and brothers have become monsters. Is there a balance between justice and forgiveness? Can true unity be attainted? These questions, they must learn to answer while the werewolves and the shadows of Arkillon pry with rising hunger. If they don’t, Avaleur, and themselves, will be torn apart.

  Book 2 Part 2 Desired Feedback:
  1 Did the story hold your interest?
  2 Could you relate to the main character(s)?
  3 Interesting setting?
  4 Discrepancies or inconsistencies?
  5 Any parts that confused, frustrated, or annoyed you?
  6 Did the story lag at any point?
  7 Was there ever too much exposition?
  8 Other comments?

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• The hunt

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 72,000 Beta Readers: 2

  I want a quick review of whether the story is compelling to readers and will make for an interesting read.

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• Weathering Echowinds (1 of 3)

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 78,000 Beta Readers: 1

  FIrst of three parts of Book 2 of The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix Trilogy. Check out the first book (The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix: Legacy) on Amazon, Kobo, BN, etc. if you are interested.

  Book 2 Summary:
  Namesiwa gave everything to ensure the ruins of Avaleur would survive. No. He...

  FIrst of three parts of Book 2 of The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix Trilogy. Check out the first book (The Rise of Arkillon's Phoenix: Legacy) on Amazon, Kobo, BN, etc. if you are interested.

  Book 2 Summary:
  Namesiwa gave everything to ensure the ruins of Avaleur would survive. No. He gave everything to ensure the survival of the Avaleurian people. The legacy he left behind now rests in the hands of a new Sage and those who will stand with her.
  Syen and Roland, Sage and knight, hold first to the hope Namesiwa showed them. But grips can loosen with uncertainty and doubt. Friends have become enemies. Sons and brothers have become monsters. Is there a balance between justice and forgiveness? Can true unity be attainted? These questions, they must learn to answer while the werewolves and the shadows of Arkillon pry with rising hunger. If they don’t, Avaleur, and themselves, will be torn apart.

  Book 2 Part 1 Desired Feedback:
  1 Did the story hold your interest?
  2 Could you relate to the main character(s)?
  3 Interesting setting?
  4 Discrepancies or inconsistencies?
  5 Any parts that confused, frustrated, or annoyed you?
  6 Did the story lag at any point?
  7 Was there ever too much exposition?
  8 Other comments?

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• A Secret Mermaid - Daughter of the Gods

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 37,214 Beta Readers: 1

  I would love any type of criticism, praise, notes, critiques, etc. I would love to know which characters you like, which lines you like, and which you don't, and which your not sure of. Tell me if you think I should cut a part out, etc.

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• Sairon: The Fake DNA's Loving Soul

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 75,000 Beta Readers: 1

  Chained by History and DNA

  In a sci-fi fantasy planet called Ns, the Myloseans, the ruling race, subjugate the slave class, the Adhirans. A princess, named Nadine, wishes to be queen because she believes that is what she is destined to do as part of her family, the Cyrils. However;...

  Chained by History and DNA

  In a sci-fi fantasy planet called Ns, the Myloseans, the ruling race, subjugate the slave class, the Adhirans. A princess, named Nadine, wishes to be queen because she believes that is what she is destined to do as part of her family, the Cyrils. However; she is not that bright and hasn't unlocked her powers yet, which most people would have unlocked by her age. Shunned by her family, she wishes to join the military to unlock her powers.

  Meanwhile an organization called to Elakiar hopes to exterminate the Myloseans in order for the Adhirans to be free. And other characters with hidden motives stand in her way. Will the chains tighten around Nadine? Will she break free? Or maybe something else entirely?

  Contains:
  Violence
  Gore
  Rape
  Sexual Assault
  Implied Sex

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• SBD 1

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 25,400 Beta Readers: 0

  While being pursued by a group of vigilantes, Ikai runs into a shimmering light that takes him 300 years into the past. As he navigates the fantastic, ancient world of history that he only ever read about in books, Ikai discovers things about himself that he didn't know was possible....

  While being pursued by a group of vigilantes, Ikai runs into a shimmering light that takes him 300 years into the past. As he navigates the fantastic, ancient world of history that he only ever read about in books, Ikai discovers things about himself that he didn't know was possible.

  Usehjiki of the past and Usehjiki of the future have their lines crossed, with Ikai at the intersection. With the help of new, found allies, Ikai will race against prophecies to untangle the mysteries of Usehjiki and reveal the bits of its history that have been lost to the hands of time.

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  I won't mind any type of comments that you can offer about plot, characterization and world-building.

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• Forces: The Entire Story

  Primary Genre: Other fiction Word Count: 75,323 Beta Readers: 1

  This is a Sonic FanFiction written in a Dramatic/action and suspenseful way. It is not a manuscript. The Story is split into 2 series of Chapters adding up to 75k words. I put a lot of effort into this it being my first ever time trying to write a story....

  This is a Sonic FanFiction written in a Dramatic/action and suspenseful way. It is not a manuscript. The Story is split into 2 series of Chapters adding up to 75k words. I put a lot of effort into this it being my first ever time trying to write a story. I just want some honest and stern opinions. if you like it or not
  Story Contains: Language(That's Censored) Violence, Drama and some Humor.
  This is a Re-Telling of the Sonic Forces Video Game in a sad dramatic dark tone way. It starts off like the game but after that It goes in entire different direction. It mostly centers around the Resistance rather then it being on Sonic and his friends. They are around but they are NOT the main focus. Sonic and Tails do have a lot of word time but they are NOT the main focus.

  Thanks for reading/listening to it and I hope you enjoy it.

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• Fighting The Undead

  Primary Genre: Realistic fiction Word Count: 38,338 Beta Readers: 0

  When 16 year old, James Andrews, wakes up alone and in a zombie apocalypse, he is kidnapped and reunited with his family. Only problem? They were being held captive by an evil gang. They end up running into more dangers as the book developes.

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• We Were Born of Spellfire

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 90,000 Beta Readers: 3

  Two sisters have hidden in a northern Norwegian birch forest, far away from witch hunters, until they became women. Now that their grandmother is gone, one sister puts a curse on the village that burned her mother and forced them to run while the other sister leaves to start a...

  Two sisters have hidden in a northern Norwegian birch forest, far away from witch hunters, until they became women. Now that their grandmother is gone, one sister puts a curse on the village that burned her mother and forced them to run while the other sister leaves to start a new life without magic. But they both must find a way to survive or else face a destiny that always seems to find witches, wicked or not.

  I'm looking for feedback on:
  1. the overall story - do you want to keep reading? is there anything that's boring or confusing or doesn't work plot-wise?
  2. the characters - do you connect with them, like them, hate them, feel enough either way about them?
  3. the language - how do you like the style? does it draw you in, make you cringe? are there moments that you think there should be more action and less reflection or more reflection and less action?

  But also, whatever (constructive) feedback you want to give is much appreciated!

  Thanks! :)

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