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  • Chapter 1. Blood, Death & Kidnap in Mexico

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 1,306 Beta Readers: 4

    Our heroes are in Aztec Mexico where they are leading a rebellion to capture the city of Tlacopan.

    Looking for general edit tips.

  • Lady of Death Finished

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 98,500 Beta Readers: 0

    I would like to know if the story is enjoyable not so much grammatical. If it makes sense as much as an urban fantasy can. No plotholes. She is an assassin so she's no saint but I want her to be relatable.

  • The Groundworld Heroes

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 24,500 Beta Readers: 0

    Benjamin is a mole living the good life in Soiland, an underground kingdom of animals, until humans attack. When President Mr. Hare orders the Mole Digger Team to dig a subway that connects to a world created by their ancestors decades ago, Benjamin joins in the digging and finds a...

    Benjamin is a mole living the good life in Soiland, an underground kingdom of animals, until humans attack. When President Mr. Hare orders the Mole Digger Team to dig a subway that connects to a world created by their ancestors decades ago, Benjamin joins in the digging and finds a dragonfly fossil. He sneaks off to a laboratory to examine the worth of the treasure, and on his way back, he saves a meerkat named Conner. The two find themselves left behind at the empty evacuation zone. Now Benjamin and Conner must embark on a journey to find the tunnel where the animals of Soiland are in despite the humans lurking around every corner or else they'll be caught and traded away for treasures.

  • She Sings at Dawn

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 92,000 Beta Readers: 3

    Dead royals. Forgotten heir. Nosy Princess.

    The conviction and ensuing punishment by death of her step-sister, Princess Odeia, always perplexed Princess Aylo. The heir to the crown had nothing to gain by murdering Aylo’s mother, the Queen of Saursi. Four years later, Aylo’s suspicions are reawakened from an unexpected discovery:...

    Dead royals. Forgotten heir. Nosy Princess.

    The conviction and ensuing punishment by death of her step-sister, Princess Odeia, always perplexed Princess Aylo. The heir to the crown had nothing to gain by murdering Aylo’s mother, the Queen of Saursi. Four years later, Aylo’s suspicions are reawakened from an unexpected discovery: Odeia’s journals. And when another death turns up the night after a kingdom festival, Aylo wonders if it’s connected to those from years ago.

    That fateful night, everything changes. Though new piles of duties and a covert match-maker intrude on her agenda, Aylo digs into the past. Deadly secrets unfold, enough to put a target on her back. Aylo must discover the truth before the murderer strikes again or she’s whisked into a betrothal.

    I can not do a read for read exchange as my device is not compatible with the app. But I am truly grateful to anyone who would willing read my book (even part of it) and give me some feedback! Right now, my biggest concerns are the mystery plot/ threads/ reveal, pacing, and the character arc of the MC. I have some ideas on future edits relating to Aylo’s character arc and the world building, so if you were to focus in one area, I’d say pinpointing plot and pacing edits. Any and all critiques are welcome, though!

  • The novel about Christmas

    Primary Genre: Fairy tale Word Count: -1 Beta Readers: 0

    the world was very beautiful the novel was all about Christmas the world was very cold the world was very sweet the world was very big the world was very enchanted the fairies were very beautiful

  • Devils Among Us

    Primary Genre: Gothic fiction Word Count: 106,129 Beta Readers: 4

    Kalandra's nearly perfect afterlife gets turned upside down with the sudden disappearance of her brood sister. Together, with her mate Alexander and some suspicious siblings, she must navigate what it means to be a vampire in the modern age and how she will survive in it.

    If any additional edits...

    Kalandra's nearly perfect afterlife gets turned upside down with the sudden disappearance of her brood sister. Together, with her mate Alexander and some suspicious siblings, she must navigate what it means to be a vampire in the modern age and how she will survive in it.

    If any additional edits need to be made, if the ending works or needs to be reworked/rewritten and what you like about it

  • Dead After Dark

    Primary Genre: Other fiction Word Count: 40,613 Beta Readers: 0

    Paige is headstrong, loyal, and compassionate, and has fallen completely and irrevocably in love with Adrian through a passionate, soul-shaking bond and mating ceremony.
    Adrian is a dangerously sexy vampire-shifter hybrid dedicated to loving and protecting both his mate and their unborn child.
    They couldn’t ask for a better life,...

    Paige is headstrong, loyal, and compassionate, and has fallen completely and irrevocably in love with Adrian through a passionate, soul-shaking bond and mating ceremony.
    Adrian is a dangerously sexy vampire-shifter hybrid dedicated to loving and protecting both his mate and their unborn child.
    They couldn’t ask for a better life, except for being on the run from crooked cops and Paige’s desperate ex-boyfriend. Their picture perfect life together soon spirals out of control, threatening everything they hold sacred.
    Trouble lurks around every corner when Paige and Adrian’s loyalties are tested, and their plans for a happily ever after are jeopardized by malevolent forces from their past.
    With enemies all around them, will the two be ripped apart or will they beat the odds that continue to stack against them?

  • The King of Both Worlds; Chapter one

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 3,000 Beta Readers: 4

    I want any negitzive and positive thoughts you have. If you especially like a specific scene tell me. If you especially hate it, tell me. Don't focus on grammar or spelling for now, I'll get to that later. Thank you.

  • Flowers for the Lady with Sad Eyes

    Primary Genre: Romance Word Count: 69,930 Beta Readers: 0

    1. Does the first page make you want to turn the page and keep reading?. Better yet, do the first few sentences make you care about what comes next?

    2. Does my book hit a lull for you at any point, and were you tempted to skip paragraphs or even...

    1. Does the first page make you want to turn the page and keep reading?. Better yet, do the first few sentences make you care about what comes next?

    2. Does my book hit a lull for you at any point, and were you tempted to skip paragraphs or even pages, because your attention was wandering so much?

    3. Did you skip over content or skim over it (at least in parts) to speed up the reading, so you could “get it over with”? Was it because of the book itself — too much detail, irritating dialogue, etc. — or because you weren’t in the right headspace for reading it?

    4.Did you think anything was missing?

    5.Did the writing help or hinder your engagement with the story?

  • Beginning of the First Age

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 956 Beta Readers: 0

    Scenery description and tense consistency. I write in third person present tense and would like to see if I made any inconsistencies. Also checking if my first chapter grips attention.