Post your own manuscripts or browse the ones below. You can request access to beta read or exchange feedback. The free Edit Out Loud mobile app lets you securely read or convert text to audio and listen to leave feedback on the go.
Get Beta Readers for Your WorkFirst chapter of an episodic LGBTQ series.
The Traitor's Daughter is a gritty medieval fantasy with elements of political intrigue, romance and magical realism thrown in. If you like multi-POV stories with strong female leads, ominous prophecies and character-driven plots - then this book is for you!
I'm currently looking for beta readers for my prologue. I...
The Traitor's Daughter is a gritty medieval fantasy with elements of political intrigue, romance and magical realism thrown in. If you like multi-POV stories with strong female leads, ominous prophecies and character-driven plots - then this book is for you!
I'm currently looking for beta readers for my prologue. I am happy to critique the work of others in return, especially if they are writing within the fantasy or sci-fi genres.
If you are interested in doing some beta reading for the rest of the novel, then please get in touch.
Synopsis: A death harbinger with a heart of gold and a legendary Irish warrior doing community service are both teachers at a magnet public high school specializing in magic in Jacksonville, FL. When it turns out their student is this century's Chosen One, they have to work together to make...
Synopsis: A death harbinger with a heart of gold and a legendary Irish warrior doing community service are both teachers at a magnet public high school specializing in magic in Jacksonville, FL. When it turns out their student is this century's Chosen One, they have to work together to make sure the destiny chosen for her by the Council of Pantheons isn't a death sentence.
I'm looking for anything that could drag the plot beats or confuse a reader. Also want to get an idea of what demographics this would appeal to. This is a shorter SFF novel. I want it to be a nice fun read and wrote it specifically to appeal to teachers looking for a quick escape from reality, but now I'm wondering if this has come off too YA.
Dayin Jackon had to escape his city, Riverton. He discovers that his parents were not who he thought they were and that even HE isn't who he thought he was.
He learns that there are bad people looking for him and that if he wants to keep living his life...
Dayin Jackon had to escape his city, Riverton. He discovers that his parents were not who he thought they were and that even HE isn't who he thought he was.
He learns that there are bad people looking for him and that if he wants to keep living his life the way he wants to, he needs to learn to control his magic. And most importantly, run.
I would really like feedback on the coherency of the novel as a whole, as well as where there are plotholes or things that don't seem to meet up as well as they should.
Sixty-six million years ago, there was a species called Pectinodon formosus, a type of raptor dinosaur that had built a civilization, unparalleled by any before or after it. They called themselves the Krekata. But not even several hundred thousand years of development could save them from the apocalyptic event that...
Sixty-six million years ago, there was a species called Pectinodon formosus, a type of raptor dinosaur that had built a civilization, unparalleled by any before or after it. They called themselves the Krekata. But not even several hundred thousand years of development could save them from the apocalyptic event that was approaching.
Except the radical new discovery of time travel. Hundreds of their kind have left, using portals in time to find a new home. None have returned.
Kra e Tac, a young member of the Krekata, finally signed up, not expecting anything to come of it. But he will find what no one else had found and lived to tell about.
He will find us.
Rating: Adult, Gay Romantic Litature, fantasy romance (not erotica), Post Apocalypse Fantasy, dark, violence
Blurb:
Children in Iseac have started to go missing. Threatened with the loss of his leadership role, Elijah has been ordered to uncover who is responsible and stop them.
Uncovering that magical bound mates exist during...
Rating: Adult, Gay Romantic Litature, fantasy romance (not erotica), Post Apocalypse Fantasy, dark, violence
Blurb:
Children in Iseac have started to go missing. Threatened with the loss of his leadership role, Elijah has been ordered to uncover who is responsible and stop them.
Uncovering that magical bound mates exist during a battle against an experimented creature was the only start of his problems. Elijah realizes that his mate has his own interests and plans, which do not include him. After the perpetrators kidnap children of his clan members it leaves his ranks in chaos.
Elijah’s pursuit leads to pitch black sewers filled with hordes of predators and into the snow-capped mountains where he is hunted by a pack of massive sized cats with long fangs and needle-sharp claws.
Elijah and his mate must overcome their own interests, not just to find the missing children, but for their own survival.
The world is reintroduced to an ancient power struggle when a group of vengeful teens spent a bloody Summer in Chicago.
It's a mature read with racial, religious and alternative history narratives.
A boy who speaks from silent cold lips, his mother a demon her voice like a blade held to his neck allowing no truth to be told, his father a ghost not seen nor heard. Along the walls of his home scars and spots stained with blood of something unspoken....
A boy who speaks from silent cold lips, his mother a demon her voice like a blade held to his neck allowing no truth to be told, his father a ghost not seen nor heard. Along the walls of his home scars and spots stained with blood of something unspoken. A mystery only solved by a voice, a voice which he is said not to have. To prove, to show, to commit, and to tell a truth to a lie he has been burdened with. your unless that's what you are and until you can prove me wrong that's what you're gonna be!"
I am writing a fantasy series and have spent a lot of time world-building and writing backstories and am now ready to start actually writing a full novel. I intended to start from the POV of a 14-year-old girl (Yasmay) writing in the third person; the series would loosely follow...
I am writing a fantasy series and have spent a lot of time world-building and writing backstories and am now ready to start actually writing a full novel. I intended to start from the POV of a 14-year-old girl (Yasmay) writing in the third person; the series would loosely follow her arch as she grew to 19 years of age. Still, when I sat down to write, I thought to go in a different direction and start the series when she's 17 instead and recap through memories in book one. I will also post the original beginning titled Bealbry #1 and would appreciate feedback on which version you (the beta reader) prefer. Oh and apologies for any unexplained terminology.
I am writing a fantasy series and have spent a lot of time world-building and writing backstories and am now ready to start actually writing a full novel. I intended to start from the POV of a 14-year-old girl (Yasmay) writing in the third person; the series would loosely follow...
I am writing a fantasy series and have spent a lot of time world-building and writing backstories and am now ready to start actually writing a full novel. I intended to start from the POV of a 14-year-old girl (Yasmay) writing in the third person; the series would loosely follow her arch as she grew to 19 years of age. Still, when I sat down to write, I thought to go in a different direction and start the series when she's 17 instead and recap through memories in book one. I will also post the original beginning titled Bealbry #2 and would appreciate feedback on which version you (the beta reader) prefer. Oh and apologies for any unexplained terminology.