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Origin and Earth (Full)
Primary Genre: Science fiction Word Count: 140,000 Beta Readers: 0Series title is The Orris Project, this is the first book, Origin and Earth. The story follows the protagonist, Garrett Rhodes, who is an Envoy for the long-dead planet Osa. His is tasked with sending volunteers from five planets to an Intergalactic ship called Orris. The story follows his time...
See full descriptionSeries title is The Orris Project, this is the first book, Origin and Earth. The story follows the protagonist, Garrett Rhodes, who is an Envoy for the long-dead planet Osa. His is tasked with sending volunteers from five planets to an Intergalactic ship called Orris. The story follows his time on Earth, his fifth planet, as well as his Origin on Osa.
I'm looking for general feedback. I'm about to send this version to an editor to clean up the writing. This is my first novel, but I have already written the rough draft for book two. -
1000 nights to freedom part 2
Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 16,000 Beta Readers: 1chapter 8 to chapter 15
this follows the Selati Clan at the beginning of their formation as they put their heads together to uncover the secrets of the imperial city and rebellion. however, they get tangled up in unexpected circumstance that put a halt to them attaining their freedom.
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The Highest Bounty: A Starfinder Story
Primary Genre: Science fiction Word Count: 13,700 Beta Readers: 2This is an ongoing story and I want feedback on how it comes off to readers so far. I'd like to see if it catches your attention, where if it does, and anyway I can improve it. This is a passion project of mine, so I want to make it...
See full descriptionThis is an ongoing story and I want feedback on how it comes off to readers so far. I'd like to see if it catches your attention, where if it does, and anyway I can improve it. This is a passion project of mine, so I want to make it the best possible.
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Phoenix King
Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 5,570 Beta Readers: 0Hello,
Phoenix King is a dark fantasy, and anime/Arthurian themed story.
This is the sequel to Curse of the Shadow King.
If you'd like a free eBook copy of book one, DM me (IG) Author_Joseph_Harkreader
If you enjoy well written/lovable characters, and tons of mythology and magic ~ this is...See full descriptionHello,
Phoenix King is a dark fantasy, and anime/Arthurian themed story.
This is the sequel to Curse of the Shadow King.
If you'd like a free eBook copy of book one, DM me (IG) Author_Joseph_Harkreader
If you enjoy well written/lovable characters, and tons of mythology and magic ~ this is for you!
I'm looking for feedback on pacing, dialogue and the flow of action/magic.
What do you like?
What don't you like?
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The signing (plz help ) beginning give me some good ideas, for a way to train.
Primary Genre: Science fiction Word Count: 17,561 Beta Readers: 2Hi, I'm trying to write a dystopian kind of novel. I'm currently feeling jumbled and unsure. I really like how the book is in the end but I've been struggling with writing the start, I only have a few chapters in right now and just wanted to throw it out...
See full descriptionHi, I'm trying to write a dystopian kind of novel. I'm currently feeling jumbled and unsure. I really like how the book is in the end but I've been struggling with writing the start, I only have a few chapters in right now and just wanted to throw it out there for anyone to read. Please give me some amazing suggestions and routes. I really am struggling with getting this in the same tone as the beginning chapters (1.2) and making it grow. Also I know my grammar is bad, just in the very beginning stages.
Im having issues with maybe introducing characters, and also feel its to short. I have planned out the middle to end and like the direction but will keep it updated as i go. -
Everything is Red in Space
Primary Genre: Science fiction Word Count: 18,600 Beta Readers: 0Murphy is an astronaut who spent billions of years in isolation after all people on Earth died to a plague. They recollect their identity by retelling their stories with Hal and with the people they loved.
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Prologue- 1000 nights to freedom
Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 2,000 Beta Readers: 1introduction to two of the secondary characters of the book. Levi and Rafiwa in a train accident that turn out to be a twist in fate.
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1000 nights to freedom
Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 16,000 Beta Readers: 2The first eight chapter of the book.
It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects...See full descriptionThe first eight chapter of the book.
It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects that the main five characters have personally suffered from and want to escape thus attaining freedom. -
The hunt
Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 72,000 Beta Readers: 2I want a quick review of whether the story is compelling to readers and will make for an interesting read.
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A Secret Mermaid - Daughter of the Gods
Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 37,214 Beta Readers: 1I would love any type of criticism, praise, notes, critiques, etc. I would love to know which characters you like, which lines you like, and which you don't, and which your not sure of. Tell me if you think I should cut a part out, etc.