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  • Devils Among Us

    Primary Genre: Gothic fiction Word Count: 106,129 Beta Readers: 0

    Kalandra's nearly perfect afterlife gets turned upside down with the sudden disappearance of her brood sister. Together, with her mate Alexander and some suspicious siblings, she must navigate what it means to be a vampire in the modern age and how she will survive in it.

    If any additional edits...

    Kalandra's nearly perfect afterlife gets turned upside down with the sudden disappearance of her brood sister. Together, with her mate Alexander and some suspicious siblings, she must navigate what it means to be a vampire in the modern age and how she will survive in it.

    If any additional edits need to be made, if the ending works or needs to be reworked/rewritten and what you like about it

  • Dead After Dark

    Primary Genre: Other fiction Word Count: 40,613 Beta Readers: 0

    Paige is headstrong, loyal, and compassionate, and has fallen completely and irrevocably in love with Adrian through a passionate, soul-shaking bond and mating ceremony.
    Adrian is a dangerously sexy vampire-shifter hybrid dedicated to loving and protecting both his mate and their unborn child.
    They couldn’t ask for a better life,...

    Paige is headstrong, loyal, and compassionate, and has fallen completely and irrevocably in love with Adrian through a passionate, soul-shaking bond and mating ceremony.
    Adrian is a dangerously sexy vampire-shifter hybrid dedicated to loving and protecting both his mate and their unborn child.
    They couldn’t ask for a better life, except for being on the run from crooked cops and Paige’s desperate ex-boyfriend. Their picture perfect life together soon spirals out of control, threatening everything they hold sacred.
    Trouble lurks around every corner when Paige and Adrian’s loyalties are tested, and their plans for a happily ever after are jeopardized by malevolent forces from their past.
    With enemies all around them, will the two be ripped apart or will they beat the odds that continue to stack against them?

  • Break the Silence - Rikashi Book 1

    Primary Genre: Romance Word Count: 56,600 Beta Readers: 2

    Josephine's best friend, Aerandir disappeared right after high school, just when she was getting ready to admit her feelings for him. Now, many years later, he's back and needs her help rescuing his brother. He's also...a dragon shifter.
    Looking for the usual beta reading looking for plot holes and things...

    Josephine's best friend, Aerandir disappeared right after high school, just when she was getting ready to admit her feelings for him. Now, many years later, he's back and needs her help rescuing his brother. He's also...a dragon shifter.
    Looking for the usual beta reading looking for plot holes and things we might have missed.

  • Flowers for the Lady with Sad Eyes

    Primary Genre: Romance Word Count: 69,930 Beta Readers: 0

    1. Does the first page make you want to turn the page and keep reading?. Better yet, do the first few sentences make you care about what comes next?

    2. Does my book hit a lull for you at any point, and were you tempted to skip paragraphs or even...

    1. Does the first page make you want to turn the page and keep reading?. Better yet, do the first few sentences make you care about what comes next?

    2. Does my book hit a lull for you at any point, and were you tempted to skip paragraphs or even pages, because your attention was wandering so much?

    3. Did you skip over content or skim over it (at least in parts) to speed up the reading, so you could “get it over with”? Was it because of the book itself — too much detail, irritating dialogue, etc. — or because you weren’t in the right headspace for reading it?

    4.Did you think anything was missing?

    5.Did the writing help or hinder your engagement with the story?

  • Beginning of the First Age

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 956 Beta Readers: 0

    Scenery description and tense consistency. I write in third person present tense and would like to see if I made any inconsistencies. Also checking if my first chapter grips attention.

  • SC0905

    Primary Genre: Romance Word Count: 75,366 Beta Readers: 0

    I have a list of questions I would like answered. Please email me at AGehm07@gmail.com in order to fully receive payment and for me to receive feedback. Thank you in advance.

  • A Tale Of Blood and Fury.

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 2,771 Beta Readers: 0

    After a bloody raid, Eshe finds herself the last living heir to the throne of a newly formed Empire.
    Thrust into a court of disapproving chiefs, rebellious cities and warring kingdoms, will Eshe be able to keep the peace of the empire all while proving that a woman can wear...

    After a bloody raid, Eshe finds herself the last living heir to the throne of a newly formed Empire.
    Thrust into a court of disapproving chiefs, rebellious cities and warring kingdoms, will Eshe be able to keep the peace of the empire all while proving that a woman can wear a crown?
    Eshe will have to make tough decisions that go against her morals, she will have to lose the people she loves over and over again and endure heartbreak, but it's worth it for her empire.
    I want to know if;
    The world-building is okay,
    If the characters are interesting,
    And if the story is compelling.

  • Penny's Song NEW Aug 2022

    Primary Genre: Tragicomedy Word Count: 88,000 Beta Readers: 0

    Music aficionado Penny Herrick escapes her alcoholic and abusive father. She’s both unwed and pregnant, it’s 1970, and she lands in Greenwich Village, New York City.

    Penny’s naivete shatters when she meets face-to-face with the city’s urban decay and ne’er do well strangers. But a chance encounter with musician Randy...

    Music aficionado Penny Herrick escapes her alcoholic and abusive father. She’s both unwed and pregnant, it’s 1970, and she lands in Greenwich Village, New York City.

    Penny’s naivete shatters when she meets face-to-face with the city’s urban decay and ne’er do well strangers. But a chance encounter with musician Randy Wilton improves her life profoundly. A deep friendship develops upon discovering he’s gay, and they form a chosen family that’s ahead of their time.

    Penny’s confidence and assertiveness grow under his tutelage. She encourages Randy to be open about his sexuality. But tragedy strikes when he comes out publicly. He spirals down a dark hole, creating a situation that’s too much like Penny’s former life, and she blames herself. Penny's willing to help him, but when she learns her father had a heart attack and her baby becomes seriously ill, she wrestles with the decision to keep her new family together…or return to her parents hoping to change things before her dad dies.

  • Ian saves himself first

    Primary Genre: Realistic fiction Word Count: 5,000 Beta Readers: 3

    I need to know what you think. What did you like? Not like?

  • Allies & Adversaries - The Katalonan Chronicles - Book 1

    Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 77,000 Beta Readers: 9

    In the intertwined ethereal and corporeal realms are people who serve as the conduit between the gods, elementals, and humans. These are the Katalonans. Every day, they face the choice to keep the balance between the two worlds or wield the power they hold over light and dark.

    Beliza, 12,...

    In the intertwined ethereal and corporeal realms are people who serve as the conduit between the gods, elementals, and humans. These are the Katalonans. Every day, they face the choice to keep the balance between the two worlds or wield the power they hold over light and dark.

    Beliza, 12, an orphan, has had enough of the abuse she suffers in her village. Threatened with exorcism, she leaves despite having nowhere to go and nothing to her name. At the edge of the woods, she encounters a mysterious woman they call the Chief Katalonan, who entices her to find answers to the strange experiences in her life.

    Beliza finds herself in the wilderness, in a Katalonan training camp, together with eight other kids. She gives in to an inner calling despite her insecurities over her lack of knowledge in the craft. The lure of the ethereal world, the Hiwagaan, is strong notwithstanding the sinister atmosphere that surrounds it.

    At camp, she makes friends and finds a father figure in her elemental guide, a being with the body of a man and the head of a Tamaraw. Beliza and the others learn Katalonan skills, battle dangerous dark entities and their own childhood traumas.

    With the death of the Chief Katalonan and the looming turmoil in Hiwagaan bleeding into their world, the Sansinukob, Beliza and her allies must face unknown adversaries sent by Sitan, the lord of darkness. And they must do this without a leader and their team hobbled by treachery.

    Dark Fantasy based on Philippine Lore.

    I would love for feedback on the story, characters and dialogues.