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• Night

  Primary Genre: Short story Word Count: 6,525 Beta Readers: 2

  Synopsis: A young woman must struggle to survive as the last person on a dead planet that has been plunged into an endless night

  Details: Looking for as detailed and comprehensive feedback as possible, the more in-depth the better

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• THE DEVIL THAT WILL

  Primary Genre: Science fiction Word Count: 122,894 Beta Readers: 6

  The world is reintroduced to an ancient power struggle when a group of vengeful teens spent a bloody Summer in Chicago.

  It's a mature read with racial, religious and alternative history narratives.

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• 『𝕮𝖔𝖑𝖔𝖗𝖊𝖉』『𝕽𝖔𝖘𝖊𝖘』

  Primary Genre: Mystery Word Count: 1,719 Beta Readers: 0

  A boy who speaks from silent cold lips, his mother a demon her voice like a blade held to his neck allowing no truth to be told, his father a ghost not seen nor heard. Along the walls of his home scars and spots stained with blood of something unspoken....

  A boy who speaks from silent cold lips, his mother a demon her voice like a blade held to his neck allowing no truth to be told, his father a ghost not seen nor heard. Along the walls of his home scars and spots stained with blood of something unspoken. A mystery only solved by a voice, a voice which he is said not to have. To prove, to show, to commit, and to tell a truth to a lie he has been burdened with. your unless that's what you are and until you can prove me wrong that's what you're gonna be!"

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• Bealbry #2

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 250 Beta Readers: 1

  I am writing a fantasy series and have spent a lot of time world-building and writing backstories and am now ready to start actually writing a full novel. I intended to start from the POV of a 14-year-old girl (Yasmay) writing in the third person; the series would loosely follow...

  I am writing a fantasy series and have spent a lot of time world-building and writing backstories and am now ready to start actually writing a full novel. I intended to start from the POV of a 14-year-old girl (Yasmay) writing in the third person; the series would loosely follow her arch as she grew to 19 years of age. Still, when I sat down to write, I thought to go in a different direction and start the series when she's 17 instead and recap through memories in book one. I will also post the original beginning titled Bealbry #1 and would appreciate feedback on which version you (the beta reader) prefer. Oh and apologies for any unexplained terminology.

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• Bealbry #1

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 435 Beta Readers: 2

  I am writing a fantasy series and have spent a lot of time world-building and writing backstories and am now ready to start actually writing a full novel. I intended to start from the POV of a 14-year-old girl (Yasmay) writing in the third person; the series would loosely follow...

  I am writing a fantasy series and have spent a lot of time world-building and writing backstories and am now ready to start actually writing a full novel. I intended to start from the POV of a 14-year-old girl (Yasmay) writing in the third person; the series would loosely follow her arch as she grew to 19 years of age. Still, when I sat down to write, I thought to go in a different direction and start the series when she's 17 instead and recap through memories in book one. I will also post the original beginning titled Bealbry #2 and would appreciate feedback on which version you (the beta reader) prefer. Oh and apologies for any unexplained terminology.

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• 19S: Enix and Serena Chapter 1

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 9,657 Beta Readers: 1

  Summary: Agent Nineteen gets activated to infiltrate a warehouse in the wetlands of SouthEast Asia. His mission is to gather intelligence and eliminate the vendor who's supplying the opposition. Whilst being watched by his higher ups back at base. Soon after he recovers the intel and eliminates his target, he...

  Summary: Agent Nineteen gets activated to infiltrate a warehouse in the wetlands of SouthEast Asia. His mission is to gather intelligence and eliminate the vendor who's supplying the opposition. Whilst being watched by his higher ups back at base. Soon after he recovers the intel and eliminates his target, he faces another obstacle in his mission. This takes place in the year 2052.

  Genre: Action, Adventure, Military

  Writers Note: Any feedback is fine, mostly editing purposes and making it sound smooth and knowing what I'm doing lol (I'm kind of new to this.)

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• The Iron Gate

  Primary Genre: Swashbuckler Word Count: 72,000 Beta Readers: 0

  Hey readers!

  I am looking for someone out there who loves fiction with a dystopian bent, think the Broken Earth Trilogy by N.K. Jemisin, to have read of my latest book The Iron Gate. I am happy to receive edits for the work but I mostly just want to know...

  Hey readers!

  I am looking for someone out there who loves fiction with a dystopian bent, think the Broken Earth Trilogy by N.K. Jemisin, to have read of my latest book The Iron Gate. I am happy to receive edits for the work but I mostly just want to know if people enjoy the tale. If you think you might like to have a listen, please read the synopsis below and I look forward to hearing from you!

  The world is shaken by an explosive prison break on a volcanic island. The mastermind behind this prison break intends to head back to the mainland and instigate a civil war to position himself as the leader of Ahtia. To accomplish this, he needs to reach northernmost part of the country, where there are rumours of a devastating weapon.

  While this is happening, a young man called Jonathan has run away from home on the eve of his wedding. This seemingly insignificant event will cause ripples through the entirety of the country and could be the key to stopping the war. Fighting back against the tide of rising nationalism, Jonathan and his new friends must unite the wastelands to save their lives and create a better future.

  Thanks!

  C. David Upton

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• DawnOfTheDualApex

  Primary Genre: Fantasy Word Count: 100,000 Beta Readers: 8

  This is the 2nd Chronicle of the main books in the series of World of the Viscerebus. It continues from the 1st Chronicle. The story details Yuana's balancing act in helping Roald adapt to her world and deal with the discovery of her true self - being an Apex Viscerebus....

  This is the 2nd Chronicle of the main books in the series of World of the Viscerebus. It continues from the 1st Chronicle. The story details Yuana's balancing act in helping Roald adapt to her world and deal with the discovery of her true self - being an Apex Viscerebus. Roald is doing his best to overcome his trauma and phobia of Viscerebus while trying to sustain his relationship with Yuana. Daniel, their best friend, is dealing with the truth of his true nature, the circumstances of his mother's and baby sister's deaths and the devastating effect on Roald, who witnessed it when he was a child. But these challenges were nothing compared to what was brewing behind the scenes - an event that would upend the current world order between humans and Viscerebus. One that they were all unaware of. TO THE READERS: Please let me know what you think of the storyline, the characters, the plot, the dialogue, and if the story can stand alone. THANK YOU.

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• A Bird in a Cage

  Primary Genre: Gothic fiction Word Count: 19,458 Beta Readers: 0

  This is the first 7 seven chapters of a gothic novel I am writing.

  Gene: gothic romance and mystery with paranormal elements.

  The castle was haunted by the true ghosts in the world. Our memories.

  
  A Bird in a Cage follows the journal entries of American actress JULLIETE, fondly known...

  This is the first 7 seven chapters of a gothic novel I am writing.

  Gene: gothic romance and mystery with paranormal elements.

  The castle was haunted by the true ghosts in the world. Our memories.

  
  A Bird in a Cage follows the journal entries of American actress JULLIETE, fondly known as Plum. Plum’s career as an actress is in jeopardy. She is getting older, and her latest film is her last chance to revive her career. On top of the pressure to be young in a world where youth is paramount, her co-star AUSTIN is a married man she had an affair with, and her director seems to have it out for her. When Plum arrives at Halesworth Castle in England with her small crew, she changes.

  There is something not quite right about Halesworth Castle and its mysterious servants who disappear into the walls. Plum grapples with the different relationships she has with each crew member and writes pivotal events that happened in her life that involved each one.

  While investigating the castle one-night, Plum meets DAGON, the mysterious owner of the castle, who reinforces her worry about getting older. Dagon seduces Plum and offers her immortality. He promises her a world free of worries. A life free from earthly concerns. But there is a price to pay. To stay, young Plum must remain with Dagon in the castle for all eternity. Plum must make a choice before it is too late.

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• The Flying Funky Floppy Hat

  Primary Genre: Short story Word Count: 1,116 Beta Readers: 1

  Is this suitable for (PB) children? ways I should improve the story?

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