Chapter 1: Light Above The Pit

Primary Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 5,800

Description and Details:

I'd like some criticism about my story structure. This is my second time writing my first chapter to try to make it flow better, make it more natural and comprehensive, so feedback about that would be amazing.

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