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Get Beta Readers for Your WorkChapter 6 of Betsu no Sekai ni Mezameru. Sura & Griffin just got home from the infirmary in their Village. Settings: Gadvell Village of the Kingdom of LouwenDale, Winter.
This is my first rough draft of my Christian Fantasy novel. I am looking for any feedback, voice, character description, what works and what doesn't. I will be listening through to make my suggestions this week. Minor grammatical or tenses I will fix in my edit if you do not...
This is my first rough draft of my Christian Fantasy novel. I am looking for any feedback, voice, character description, what works and what doesn't. I will be listening through to make my suggestions this week. Minor grammatical or tenses I will fix in my edit if you do not want to bother with those. I am looking for honest feedback, so please enjoy and let me know what you think.
Damaged and severely outgunned, a lone ship must hold the line against a much larger and better-equipped force. The first story in a series (might end up being an anthology, might not).
A comical short story set in the late 1800's that follows a group of men who think they have all the answers while the town around them is falling apart.
This is a short story for a collection of stories I am writing with a friend. The collection is called...
A comical short story set in the late 1800's that follows a group of men who think they have all the answers while the town around them is falling apart.
This is a short story for a collection of stories I am writing with a friend. The collection is called Ripping on Rip.
I would like to know how the story comes across overall. Also wondering if the ending is satisfactory, sudden, or just doesn't work. I was originally planning on going darker with the ending, but took it back to keep it light hearted. I'd like to know if that is the right move.
Thanks!
I have been looking for beta readers for this manuscript, I hope you enjoy it.
"It has been two years since a series of meteors littered our planet carrying a newfound element within its rock. The element holds immense energy bringing all nations to war over the rare resource. William...
I have been looking for beta readers for this manuscript, I hope you enjoy it.
"It has been two years since a series of meteors littered our planet carrying a newfound element within its rock. The element holds immense energy bringing all nations to war over the rare resource. William Burke and his five children survived that initial impacts and now are thriving through the societal collapse. Will the great war for resources end before reaching their door, or will they be forced to run towards chaos to save one of their own."
I've been working on this story for a while, but haven't gotten to finish it. I thought I'd have some beta readers look at it over any inconsistencies that I might have with this draft. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
I wanna know if there's any plot holes
I'd like to know if it has a correct grammar, punctuations, and if the first chapter gives a hook for the readers.
When demons return to the Seven Kingdoms Spira--a ruthless killer and forgotten queen--must put her hatred for humans behind her and fight the will of Death to saver her friends and home, even if it means killing the love of her life.
My novel is a young adult fantasy. I'm...
When demons return to the Seven Kingdoms Spira--a ruthless killer and forgotten queen--must put her hatred for humans behind her and fight the will of Death to saver her friends and home, even if it means killing the love of her life.
My novel is a young adult fantasy. I'm looking for constructive criticism about the story structure, characters, and overall language quality.
Please excuse any grammatical errors--this is a draft.
Thank you!
Any kind of feedback would be appreciated! Thank you.