Spira (tentative title)

Primary Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 86,371

Description and Details:

When demons return to the Seven Kingdoms Spira--a ruthless killer and forgotten queen--must put her hatred for humans behind her and fight the will of Death to saver her friends and home, even if it means killing the love of her life.
My novel is a young adult fantasy. I'm looking for constructive criticism about the story structure, characters, and overall language quality.
Please excuse any grammatical errors--this is a draft.
Thank you!

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