Heroes & Harbingers

Primary Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 79,336

Description and Details:

Synopsis: A death harbinger with a heart of gold and a legendary Irish warrior doing community service are both teachers at a magnet public high school specializing in magic in Jacksonville, FL. When it turns out their student is this century's Chosen One, they have to work together to make sure the destiny chosen for her by the Council of Pantheons isn't a death sentence.

I'm looking for anything that could drag the plot beats or confuse a reader. Also want to get an idea of what demographics this would appeal to. This is a shorter SFF novel. I want it to be a nice fun read and wrote it specifically to appeal to teachers looking for a quick escape from reality, but now I'm wondering if this has come off too YA.

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