Into the Desert

Primary Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 12,000

Description and Details:

Zilla falls from the sky directly onto a mysterious and roguish hare, with a zipper in the back of her head and no memory of who she is and where she came from. Can she navigate the desert, a dangerous place populated by desperate and powerful creatures? Will she escape the clutches of two goddesses of foreordination bent on destroying one another and possibly even existence itself? One thing is for sure. Destiny can be cruel, but Fate is a real bitch.

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