The Mixed Blood Of My Brothers: A Farlands Tale

Primary Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 5,097

Description and Details:

This is a writing project I started last year. I'm a fairly new writer and I understand this piece has a lot of things that need to be addressed. From the character voice too the prose, I can objectively say this piece is..okay, but not good. All I really want to know from you is how I can tell this story from Elliot's perspective? Thank you for seeing this and happy reading.

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