The Trailing Spouses Network - Ch 7 to the end

Primary Genre: Romance

Word Count: 68,800

Description and Details:

This is the finale of The Trailing Spouses Network from chapter 7 to the end of chapter 11. This story follows four American families that move to South Africa. The women become friends and form a support network. The men are charming but reckless. The women take bold chances to meet their destiny.
This story is about four American families moving to South Africa. The focus is on the four women, the trailing spouses.
1. Were you confused by the shift in time?
2. An omniscient narrator tells this story. Were you confused by whose head you were in?
3. Were there slow spots that made you want to stop reading? Where?
4. This draft picks up from Chapter 7 to the end. Is the ending credible?

Thank you for reading my story.

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