The Means and the Ends

Primary Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 5,922

Description and Details:

Here lies Blue. He has died for centuries. Many lifetimes have been lived. If you can call it that.

Blue will need to start with nothing. But from nothing he finds true freedom, and a silent partner. Or at least, Blue wished he was more silent.

Looking for feedback on my flow and wording. And of course, if you have any comments on my characters I would love to hear it.

I love reading others stories as well. Would love to look over your work.

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