Torn Grounds

Primary Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 20,000

Description and Details:

The book is about the city called Portvir, which is ruled by grounds (equivalent to gangs). The main character Ti is one of the crucial members of the ground Thorns of Locust.
The main plot revolves around political disputes and magic. Ti is searching for a way to cure herself and become sorcerer.
It is far from being finished, but I would appreciate editing and comments about the existing 5 chapters)

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