Die! (a novel)

Primary Genre: Other fiction

Word Count: 16,451

Description and Details:

Dear Readers,

This book is about Joan Desussa uncovering the reasons for her father's mysterious mental collapse.

This is the first part of the book. I would greatly appreciate any feedback--specifically on any points where the story lacks profluence.

Please send me your work as well--I am more than happy to read it.


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