Primary Genre: Other fiction
Word Count: 16,451
Description and Details:
This book is about Joan Desussa uncovering the reasons for her father's mysterious mental collapse.
This is the first part of the book. I would greatly appreciate any feedback--specifically on any points where the story lacks profluence.
Please send me your work as well--I am more than happy to read it.
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