Primary Genre: Mystery
Word Count: 1,786
Description and Details:
Hey guys! I am looking for all sorts of feedback on how interesting it is, how can I make the story clearer, and grammar, punctuation, and more. Please submit feedback for whatever reason you see fit! When reading, please keep in mind that there is a murder scene in this chapter. Reader's discretion is advised.
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