Primary Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: 46,988
Description and Details:
With most of the book I would like to know if the characters were well developed and likable. And if there is anything that I could explore further, what parts were boring, and what are the books strengths and weaknesses.
In Chapters 5, 8, and 14, I have a sub plot where Henry, Juda, and two knights go out looking for Dawn. I want to know how I could develop them more.
I am open to any other suggestions as well!
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