Primary Genre: Other fiction
Word Count: 3,894
Description and Details:
I'm just looking for people to tell me how this first chapter sounds for my book. Its a book about a girl named Serena who is estranged from her family and has been working at a gentleman's club to make ends meet. When she's hired to dance at a bachelor party, she meets a famous author named Damion Sullivan who quickly sweeps her off her feet. It's later on that she finds out this man is actually married to her sister whom she hasn't seen in six years.
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