The Edge of Night

Primary Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 33,000

Description and Details:

Noah Rapizario is searching for clues about the disappearance of the world's most dangerous warlock. In her search, she stumbles upon secrets of her own organization that threaten to tear London apart in a war of humans and supernatural creatures.

I would like to know if readers find the story engaging and if there are any parts that drag or are boring. Also any nitpicks about grammar/punctuation are welcome!

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